so this is my first entry on here...i'll post the song i wrote today...

(chorus)

...and my heart is slowly beating.
it only rests when you're away.
I can't stand to see you with her.
It's all i see within my day.
As my heart slowly stops beating,
You'll wish....
You never let it break...

in to pieces, once again...
You broke my heart,
you barely care to see me standing...

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You were that boy that let my heart skip a beat.
As you kissed me slowly, my heart began to race.
I feel in love, and so did you.
Our hearts were one, and now mine's torn in two.

(chorus)

in to pieces, once again...
You broke my heart,
You barely care to see me standing...

and as you kissed me slowly I said to you,
"I don't know if I'll trust you"
You said
"baby this is all I wanna do..."
Un-break your heart...

...yea i need a title..help is appreciated

lemme know what ya think